You were definitely dressed to impress, I have one critique. I wasn't completely sure what you were pitching It would have been more effective eif in your opening statement you came right out with what you were trying to sell.
Firstly, I must agree with the comment above; you were very well dressed, and it reflected well on the overall execution of the pitch. For the most part, I thought you spoke at a good pace and gave a good balance between this and providing information. On the heels of that, I must also agree once again with the first commented when it came to what you actually pitched. I had a hard time figuring out what exactly the product was, and agree that next time focus on that and get right to the point about it. Overall good job!
Sebastian Ayoroa Galindo UFID: 6761-9270 Your Entrepreneurship Story. Entrepreneurship for me has always been a priority. I am committed to meet the demands of a business world since I am a problem solver. Back in high school in my home country, Bolivia, I was always the one making the ideas to go into trips, school activities etc. When I was about 10 years old, I told my friends to do a small business with all my neighbors, and the business was to go and wash their cars for $10. Since we were 10 years old, every neighbor was pleased about the idea, but the funny fact was that since I gave the idea I was the one just telling my friends where to go, and still get the same percentage of profit. Back then, I had no idea of what I was doing or so, but now I realized that I was a small entrepreneur. I had many entrepreneur experiences throughout my life, but that definitely is one that I will remember since I was just 10 years old. I come from an entrepreneur family, my mom is a lawyer...
I have decided to choose the book How to fail at almost everything and still win by Scott Adams from the reading list. *What was the general theme or argument of the book? The book basically said that having only one goal is for loser people. The only way to be successful is to have multiple projects/goals. You have to try all your projects until one of it is achieved. That is what really matters. *How did the book in your opinion, connected with an enhance what you are learning in ENT3003? The book has definitely made me consider being a little more selfish about some stuff I did not know. I have to take care of my self and chase all the goals i want. *If you had to design an exercise for this class, based on the book you read, what would that exercise involve? An exercise that involves students setting at least 10 goals, and at the end of the week students have to come up with how they will chase those goals, strategies etc. *What was your biggest surprise or '...
You were definitely dressed to impress, I have one critique. I wasn't completely sure what you were pitching It would have been more effective eif in your opening statement you came right out with what you were trying to sell.
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ReplyDeleteFirstly, I must agree with the comment above; you were very well dressed, and it reflected well on the overall execution of the pitch. For the most part, I thought you spoke at a good pace and gave a good balance between this and providing information. On the heels of that, I must also agree once again with the first commented when it came to what you actually pitched. I had a hard time figuring out what exactly the product was, and agree that next time focus on that and get right to the point about it. Overall good job!