You were definitely dressed to impress, I have one critique. I wasn't completely sure what you were pitching It would have been more effective eif in your opening statement you came right out with what you were trying to sell.
Firstly, I must agree with the comment above; you were very well dressed, and it reflected well on the overall execution of the pitch. For the most part, I thought you spoke at a good pace and gave a good balance between this and providing information. On the heels of that, I must also agree once again with the first commented when it came to what you actually pitched. I had a hard time figuring out what exactly the product was, and agree that next time focus on that and get right to the point about it. Overall good job!
Sebastian Ayoroa Galindo UFID: 6761-9270 Your Entrepreneurship Story. Entrepreneurship for me has always been a priority. I am committed to meet the demands of a business world since I am a problem solver. Back in high school in my home country, Bolivia, I was always the one making the ideas to go into trips, school activities etc. When I was about 10 years old, I told my friends to do a small business with all my neighbors, and the business was to go and wash their cars for $10. Since we were 10 years old, every neighbor was pleased about the idea, but the funny fact was that since I gave the idea I was the one just telling my friends where to go, and still get the same percentage of profit. Back then, I had no idea of what I was doing or so, but now I realized that I was a small entrepreneur. I had many entrepreneur experiences throughout my life, but that definitely is one that I will remember since I was just 10 years old. I come from an entrepreneur family, my mom is a lawyer...
* Where will you go? I would just walk around my apartment complex clubhouse * What kind of people will you approach? I am going to approach students. * What will you say to get the conversation started? I will say to the people I approach, "Hey, do you like to go out on the weekends?" * What is your plan for the conversation? My plan is to ask people if they like to go out and if they say yes, I would say that I'm giving away a free shot which is the $1 bill in almost every happy hour bar in midtown. * Out of five attempts, how many dollar bills do you think you will be able to give away. I think I would be able to give the $5 away. Link to the recordings: https://youtu.be/cBhY9Vfv5_8 https://youtu.be/S8MbkYEsbJ0 *What are your reflections on this exercise? I think this exercise was great because talking to random people and coming up with a reason to give a dollar is kind of hard. * Was giving ...
You were definitely dressed to impress, I have one critique. I wasn't completely sure what you were pitching It would have been more effective eif in your opening statement you came right out with what you were trying to sell.
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ReplyDeleteFirstly, I must agree with the comment above; you were very well dressed, and it reflected well on the overall execution of the pitch. For the most part, I thought you spoke at a good pace and gave a good balance between this and providing information. On the heels of that, I must also agree once again with the first commented when it came to what you actually pitched. I had a hard time figuring out what exactly the product was, and agree that next time focus on that and get right to the point about it. Overall good job!